Early days, and for a jam, but if you're willing to accept some criticism...
If your game is browser-play only, having a quit button on the main menu is kind of pointless. As it is, it just crashes everything and requires a tab/browser reset to play again.
Dollface is sporting iron sights, not a scope like she says. I dunno, maybe she's being sarcastic?
The timer is a little subtle, it took a few failures to ID why my dates were ending so badly. Maybe thicken up the bar a little, or move it adjacent to the romance gauge?
Ya gotta get out of here with that 220V outlet on the win screen! We use 120s in America, the Eastern Hemisphere wall outlet really stands out as unAmerican.
Reconsider the farm as a titlescreen backdrop - the game leans hard on the "Rednecks as hicks" trope, and while farmers can be Rednecks in the literal sense (Southern American outdoor blue collar workers) no 21st century American farmer has the mix of laziness, ignorance, and xenophobia to be described as a hick.
Gripes aside, good work putting together a system that feels tense and a little puzzle-like. I dug the Southern Fried Hatoful Boyfriend theme, too. Hope I get to play a version with Angelica and Amanda II some day.
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Early days, and for a jam, but if you're willing to accept some criticism...
If your game is browser-play only, having a quit button on the main menu is kind of pointless. As it is, it just crashes everything and requires a tab/browser reset to play again.
Dollface is sporting iron sights, not a scope like she says. I dunno, maybe she's being sarcastic?
The timer is a little subtle, it took a few failures to ID why my dates were ending so badly. Maybe thicken up the bar a little, or move it adjacent to the romance gauge?
Ya gotta get out of here with that 220V outlet on the win screen! We use 120s in America, the Eastern Hemisphere wall outlet really stands out as unAmerican.
Reconsider the farm as a titlescreen backdrop - the game leans hard on the "Rednecks as hicks" trope, and while farmers can be Rednecks in the literal sense (Southern American outdoor blue collar workers) no 21st century American farmer has the mix of laziness, ignorance, and xenophobia to be described as a hick.
Gripes aside, good work putting together a system that feels tense and a little puzzle-like. I dug the Southern Fried Hatoful Boyfriend theme, too. Hope I get to play a version with Angelica and Amanda II some day.